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The Devil To Pay Comment Challenge

Description

We expect to see a lot of Stories come out of The Devil To Pay campaign, and writers love nothing more than feedback. Writing a good, helpful, thoughtful Comment is its own skill, its own investment of time, and something on which the Intel Office has given guidance. Write as many Comments as you can on BFMS Stories posted under the Fleet-Wide mission called The Devil To Pay. These Comments must be Competition-Standard as laid out in the guide: a good paragraph of feedback, at least three sentences of some substance. Tell the writer what you’ve enjoyed about their work, and do it in some depth. Writing reviews is a skill, and practice makes perfect!

Criteria

  • Submissions must consist of links to the BFMS Stories in which you have Commented, and include a total count.
  • Stories must be part of The Devil to Pay Fleet-Wide Mission and be posted during the duration of this competition.
  • Only one Comment per Story will be counted. If you have left multiple Comments, make it clear which is being submitted.
  • The Comment must be Competition-Standard, as per the Intel Office Guide; this will be determined by the organiser and substandard Comments will be disqualified from the count.
  • Ties will be broken by order of competition submission.

Winners

Submissions

User Content Date Entry
Alexandra Sudari-Kravchik (#2121)

34 in total

Helios
https://bravofleet.com/story/136871
https://bravofleet.com/story/137415
https://bravofleet.com/story/137997
https://bravofleet.com/story/138343

Blackbird
https://bravofleet.com/story/137172
https://bravofleet.com/story/137321
https://bravofleet.com/story/137567
https://bravofleet.com/story/137706
https://bravofleet.com/story/137827
https://bravofleet.com/story/137881
https://bravofleet.com/story/137981
https://bravofleet.com/story/138144
https://bravofleet.com/story/138227
https://bravofleet.com/story/138349
https://bravofleet.com/story/138419
https://bravofleet.com/story/138474
https://bravofleet.com/story/138620
https://bravofleet.com/story/138721
https://bravofleet.com/story/138788
https://bravofleet.com/story/138892
https://bravofleet.com/story/138908
https://bravofleet.com/story/139058
https://bravofleet.com/story/139105
https://bravofleet.com/story/139185
https://bravofleet.com/story/139225

Polaris
https://bravofleet.com/story/137149
https://bravofleet.com/story/137208
https://bravofleet.com/story/137239
https://bravofleet.com/story/137305
https://bravofleet.com/story/137867
https://bravofleet.com/story/138010
https://bravofleet.com/story/138098
https://bravofleet.com/story/138202
https://bravofleet.com/story/138344

 2024-12-15 22:18:44
Varen Wyll (#2419)

8 in total. Apologies, it's a very poor showing, I really lost steam this campaign.

https://bravofleet.com/story/137149/
https://bravofleet.com/story/137167/
https://bravofleet.com/story/137149/
https://bravofleet.com/story/137241
https://bravofleet.com/story/137251
https://bravofleet.com/story/137280
https://bravofleet.com/story/137156
https://bravofleet.com/story/137475

 2024-12-15 21:24:08
Nathan Hawthorne (#2199)

Sadly RL got busy so this kinda fell off in the middle.

Bravo Fleet Comments

https://bravofleet.com/story/137171

https://bravofleet.com/story/137212

https://bravofleet.com/story/137804/

https://bravofleet.com/story/137480/

https://bravofleet.com/story/137649/

https://bravofleet.com/story/137277/

https://bravofleet.com/story/137735/

https://bravofleet.com/story/136894/

https://bravofleet.com/story/137804/

https://bravofleet.com/story/137872/

https://bravofleet.com/story/137958/

https://bravofleet.com/story/137282/

https://bravofleet.com/story/138230/

 2024-12-15 21:06:39
Aaslin Braim (#1225)

Total = 34 stories

https://bravofleet.com/story/137259

https://bravofleet.com/story/137239

https://bravofleet.com/story/137330

https://bravofleet.com/story/137521

https://bravofleet.com/story/137471

https://bravofleet.com/story/137449

https://bravofleet.com/story/137567

https://bravofleet.com/story/137638

https://bravofleet.com/story/137438

https://bravofleet.com/story/137830

https://bravofleet.com/story/137755

https://bravofleet.com/story/137739

https://bravofleet.com/story/137773

https://bravofleet.com/story/137744

https://bravofleet.com/story/137664/

https://bravofleet.com/story/137828

https://bravofleet.com/story/137862

https://bravofleet.com/story/137838

https://bravofleet.com/story/137867

https://bravofleet.com/story/137998

https://bravofleet.com/story/137979

https://bravofleet.com/story/138034

https://bravofleet.com/story/138109

https://bravofleet.com/story/138098

https://bravofleet.com/story/138144

https://bravofleet.com/story/138351

https://bravofleet.com/story/138523

https://bravofleet.com/story/138947

https://bravofleet.com/story/138991

https://bravofleet.com/story/138999

https://bravofleet.com/story/139352

https://bravofleet.com/story/139447

https://bravofleet.com/story/139542

https://bravofleet.com/story/139543

 2024-12-15 19:49:59
James Neidlinger (#1)

18 comments

https://bravofleet.com/story/137138
https://bravofleet.com/story/137145
https://bravofleet.com/story/137172
https://bravofleet.com/story/137191
https://bravofleet.com/story/137212
https://bravofleet.com/story/137259
https://bravofleet.com/story/137154
https://bravofleet.com/story/137156
https://bravofleet.com/story/137241
https://bravofleet.com/story/137251
https://bravofleet.com/story/137253
https://bravofleet.com/story/137137
https://bravofleet.com/story/137799
https://bravofleet.com/story/137168
https://bravofleet.com/story/137804
https://bravofleet.com/story/137973
https://bravofleet.com/story/137664
https://bravofleet.com/story/138034

 2024-12-15 17:36:57

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